It’s funny how sometimes ideas hit like a lightning bolt and then you can’t wait to write them down! This morning I was struggling to find an idea for today’s slice, then I opened the door and all I could think about was how hot it was already! Stepping from the cool air conditioning to the outside made me feel like I was standing in front of a blazing bonfire.
I had recently been talking with Lynne about a writing activity we often do with kids to help them think outside the box and avoid clichés when writing similes. We encourage them to make lists – lists of things that are quiet, or white, or cold, or still (Jane Yolen’s Owl Moon is often a go-to mentor text, can you tell?). It is a good way to help writers imagine possibilities and keep their writing fresh.
So, I challenged myself to list ten really hot things:
a blazing bonfire
afternoon beach sand
a sizzling grill
the engine of an overheating car
leather car seats on a sweltering day
air from a blow dryer
the barrel of a curling iron
the filling in a freshly baked pie
an attic in July
a cup of steaming coffee
Just thinking of all those hot things is making me feel hotter! Maybe I should switch to cold things.
Really like this activity Rose. I know what you mean by hot. I went out for the mail and couldn’t wait to get back inside to the AC. I guess we are spoiled.
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Ready for this hot weather to be done!!! Love this activity! I love Owl Moon! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Here’s mine from a recent hot day: sunglasses left on the dashboard! We have a bit of a break today- high is only expected to be 87.
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That’s a good one! Thanks for sharing.
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I love Owl Moon! I like this activity. I am going to try it myself and use it in the future with students.
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I definitely want to do this activity with my students! Thank you for sharing this!
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Oh my, that is an impressive list of heat. Add in a menopausal woman having a hot flash and it would be complete – not that I would know anything about that. Great activity.
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Wish I had thought of that!
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Whew! Those things made me hot too! I think you need to save this list for a day in January.
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Oh my, add a metal doorknob on a door that faces west. We were visiting friends in ID and I thought she should hang a potholder on the doorknob!
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LOVE this, Rose!
The cheese on the top of the freshly baked pizza – ouch as it burns the roof of my mouth!
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Lots of heated talk lately as the temperature continues to sizzle, makes me hot thinking about it, Rose. I like your writing activity and hope a slice of your poem makes it to my Summerscapes gallery. The invitation was sent out.
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Thanks, Carol. I’ll work on a summer poem!
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Ugh, it’s been steamy here in MN, too. What a great way to help our kids think beyond the same old cliches and phrases they use in writing. I’m stealing this idea. 🙂
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